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HELP! who can suggest or revise my poem? i really need it tomorrow! 10/09/12
- miczieshane
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Re: HELP! who can suggest or revise my poem? i really need it tomorrow! 10/09/12
[quote=Principe Azheef;#303761;1351068705]Heres the poem you want me to translate. Waakakakakaaaa!
your poem is so serious
i was amazed by the words you used in your poem
if lucky
your poem will be hear
by your bestfriend
till forever[/quote]
Good Job! it is my message in english.
you did it?
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Re: HELP! who can suggest or revise my poem? i really need it tomorrow! 10/09/12
[quote=miczieshane;#305415;1351734188]Good Job! it is my message in english.
you did it?[/quote]
Waaaaaakakakkaaaaaa any poems for us this week Maam? 
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Re: HELP! who can suggest or revise my poem? i really need it tomorrow! 10/09/12
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- miczieshane
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Re: HELP! who can suggest or revise my poem? i really need it tomorrow! 10/09/12
[quote=Principe Azheef;#304157;1351236443]UNLIKE FLU
I Really Like You
But You Don't Know
These Feelings I Have
I Can Never Show
I Always Wish That
I Could Be With You
But Deep Inside I Know
That Will Never Come True
I Think About You
Almost Everyday
Wishing I Could Find
The Right Words To Say
Hoping You Would Notice Me
When I Stare At You
But I Know That You Don't
Feel The Same As I Do
Im In Love With You
And There Is No Cure
But Forever I Will Only Be
Your Secret Admirer[/quote]
YEHEY! this poem inspire me to make my assignment
my assignment is about young love:)
this one is mine.
i dont know if it is really mine or i just modified it
[spoiler]I really like you
This feeling makes me blue
But you don’t know
I can never show
I always wish
To be a swish
For you to notice me
And set this feelings free
I always think about you
Imagining your perfect view
But i know deep inside
We will never collide
Wishing i could find
Right words to capture your mind
But i know i don’t own
Your heart; i should have known
I want this to end
but i can only pretend
Maybe im in love with you
Unluckly, it’s not curable as flu[/spoiler]
Last edited by miczieshane (2013-05-07 17:27:13)
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Re: HELP! who can suggest or revise my poem? i really need it tomorrow! 10/09/12
For some kind word I do not say,
A heart goes lonely on its way.
Those words of praise I do not speak,
May make another's courage weak.
Those friendly thoughts I do not share,
May leave another in despair.
To help someone along the way,
Will be my goal from day to day.
What loads I lift,
What joy I spread,
May live long,
After I am dead.
-Zheef
-Zheef
Last edited by Principe Azheef (2014-04-03 00:45:14)
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