My teacher in English told us that we can revise our poem through the help of our friends, classmates, family etc. As of now, I would like you to help me revise my poem using POETIC devices like figures of speech,idioms, repetition etc. You can also suggest titles. I am not good in writing so please help me here it is [spoiler][align=center] [b]Where's my common sense? [/b] Any kind of errand is really my weakness The outcome of what I'm asked will show carelessness Maybe the reason is that my brain works like a computer I realize that multitasking results to disaster I'm still wondering where on earth I left my common sense so that if I am ask to do something, I'll not be in tense[/align][/spoiler] If you're a guest contact me through Facebook: www.facebook.com/miczieshane gmail: thecutelil@gmail.com

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