[quote=chaw;#387855;1395261848]I honestly have no idea why Glenice would like a guy from Pandora High. Doesn’t she know that our schools have a long history of rivalry? I don’t know the exact details but I heard that the gun shooting fifteen years ago at Pandora was somehow related to our school. A rich ex-student from FT High fell in love with a girl from Pandora. Some Modern-day Romeo-and-Juliette shit. Except the guy got rejected, so he came to the school unattended, had guns with him and started shooting inside the classrooms as he walked down their hallways. His family owned a company that makes military weapons, but ever since this incident, their stocks went down so they had to switch to the Tobacco Industry.[/quote] this part is so interesting... thought of something like, maybe the patola is the rich ex student (of FTHS) and making revenge to the school (PHS) wahahaha well anyway, character descriptions are just okay for intro, maybe you can still describe them till chap 3 or so

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