dont say that. Everybody should read this since they're one of the characters. Hahahaha and the story now's getting more interesting. Anddd maybe.. you can make this a little bit of a horror and a little bit a comedy noh? what do you think? [quote=chaw;#388388;1395463683]Yeah I'm having a bit of a problem with drawing the line between the story being comedy or horror/freaky. I get excited with the gifs and i laugh so hard everytime it fits with my writing. I'll try not to add too much of funny gifs next time kase suspense na[/quote] baliw